the pipecleaner images are fun. the stock photo of the legs is a bit boring for a main image... looks like stock photo, doesnt look like dancing with the stars
the dept looks too boxy, you've made sections of boxes basically.. too static. the border/rules for the pullquote is awkward too. pull quotes should be thought of as a design element, an opportunity to play with type. youve essentially made another box of type but bigger..which doesnt really attract attention. the negative white space also awkward, b/c it's too boxy.
the text type from the image looks a bit dark. and looks a bit condensed too. but maybe printed out looks different.
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not sure if you showed this in class...
the pipecleaner images are fun.
the stock photo of the legs is a bit boring for a main image... looks like stock photo, doesnt look like dancing with the stars
the dept looks too boxy, you've made sections of boxes basically.. too static.
the border/rules for the pullquote is awkward too. pull quotes should be thought of as a design element, an opportunity to play with type. youve essentially made another box of type but bigger..which doesnt really attract attention. the negative white space also awkward, b/c it's too boxy.
the text type from the image looks a bit dark. and looks a bit condensed too. but maybe printed out looks different.
thanks for posting.
k
rubric also needs some work, it could be much more interesting
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